3A RIM HOMEWORK 22nd May 2020


👉 Go to our padlet.
👉 Read two articles written by some classmates of yours.
👉 For each article, write two positive comments and one comment for your classmate to work on - focus on the content and ideas rather than accuracy.

In the end, in the comment box below, list
  • what you did well while writing your article,
  • what you found more challenging while writing your article,
  • what you need to work on in your next piece of writing.
Remember to choose "anonymous" as an identity, but write your name and the initial of your surname before starting to write.

14 comments:

  1. Erika S.
    In my opinion this article is easy to write because is something of personal, so we must write what we think, I’ve found challenging organise my ideas and put them in order, so I have to work on it.

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  2. Angela G.
    I found this article easy to write, perhaps because it concerns a very common and spontaneous topic. I think I have organized my work well as I’m very picky from this point of view. I found more challenging don’t exceed the word limit given by the task and maybe find different synonyms, so as not to always repeat the same words. For the next piece of writing I need to work on making the speech smoother.

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  3. Fabio B.
    In my article in my opinion there are good concepts, I have fuond challenging write there in a good system, maybe I need practice.

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  4. Victoria C.



    according to me, it wasn’t difficult write this article but the I found challenging put together my ideas. For the next time, I need to improve my grammar and expand my vocabulary.

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  5. Tommaso L.
    I think that is quite easy write this article because the topic isn’t difficult and we can organize it according to our ideas. I’ve found challenging write the article with more appropriate words, so I need more practice.

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  6. Kevin B.
    I think this article easy to write because the topic wasn’t difficult. I found more challenging organise the concepts. For the next time i need more practice and improve my vocabulary and grammar.

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  7. Michael P.
    I think that this article is easy to write because the topic isn't difficult. For the next time, I have to improve on the length of the text and practice more to find new words and grammar

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  8. Maria Fernanda H.

    I found this article easy to write, because it was about an everyday topic and they were easy questions that I had to answer.
    What I've found quite challenging to develop my ideas and put them in order, so I think I should improve vocabulary and writing skills for the next time.

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  9. Debora V.

    I found this article quite easy to write, because it was about something that was in our life since we were youg and also because it's a happy thing.
    I found challenging write my ideas in order to make the texte more fluent, so for the next time I need to improve the structure of the sentence.

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  10. Davide A.
    in my opinion this article is easy to write because the laughing is an action we do very often, and talking about it is not difficult. For the next article i need to work on the grammar and vocabulary

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  11. In my opinione this article is easy to write because for me laughing is an action more personal. I found it nice to write this article because I put together all my ideas about laughter which is very an very importanti action for me. In the next article I need to improve in grammar.

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  12. Alessio M.
    According to me this article isn’t difficult to write because the topic was simple and so vast. I think the most challenging thing is fluidity. I need more and more practice and improve my vocabulary and especially the grammar.

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  13. Michela O.

    in my opinion with these articles they can be
    inspiration for people to let off steam free their mind and expose their theories or to tell fun facts of all kinds, and it is very nice to see and read other people's thoughts and ideas

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