👉 Read two reports written by some classmates of yours.
👉 For each report, write two positive comments and one comment for your classmate to work on - focus on the content and ideas rather than accuracy.
In the end, in the comment box below, list
- what you did well while writing your own report,
- what you found more challenging while writing your report,
- what you need to work on in your next piece of writing.
Sveva B.
ReplyDeleteWhile I was writing my report I think I have divided my text well into clear and well-organized paragraphs.
I found very challenging to find good ideas, both for the activity and for the gift, to expose.
I think I’ll work on learning more formal and specific words to make my report smoother and more professional.
MARIANNA D.M
ReplyDelete- I did well the contents, because I often have a lot of ideas, and in this case the report's topic was one that I liked the most, because was about Macklemore, a rapper I’ve been listening to for years.
- I found more challenging write in a formal way, I find it quite complex because you have to choose suitable words and not words that we use when speaking.
- I need to work on the vocabulary, maybe write more specific things and enrich my vocabulary, so that my report has a better impact
Stefania G.
ReplyDeleteI think i did well the contents, because i really like the ideas that i wrote.
I found it very challenging to write formally because I don't use formal language very much in my life.
I need to work on the structure and on vocabulary, because I have to use specific words and also i should use bullet points.
Sara L.
ReplyDeleteI think I followed the structure of the report correctly by dividing it into clear points.
I found it difficult to find some orginal ideas and use a specific vocabulary for the report.
The thing I could improve is the use of a more specific and formal language.
While I was writing my report I tought about how to organize the text of report. I found very challenging to find ideas to entertaine everyone and also the gift for Macklemore. For my next report I think I have to improve the way I write with more technical words
ReplyDeleteAlex K
Eleonora N.
ReplyDeleteI think that I have organized well the paragraphs, so the structure is correct.
I found challenging to find some original ideas and I also find difficult write in a formal way.
I think that I need to work on the specific vocabulary.
Giada B.
ReplyDeleteI think I wrote some good ideas, because I like them a lot.
It was quite easy to write a report but I have to improve the ability to use formal language and vocabulary.
finally, I believe that I have divided the structure correctly.
Elisa M.
ReplyDeleteI think I had structured correctly the report and have used right words, I really like the report’s topic because I love rap music.
I found challenging find different ideas, for the gif but also for the activities.
I need to work more about writing in a formal way and also use connectors and specific phrases to make my report more formal
Gabriele M.
ReplyDelete-I really enjoyed the idea of Macklemore at Buniva because I’m a fan and I usually listen his songs, this helped me to have ideas about the gift and activities, and I hope to have chosen well.
-It was difficult to try to keep a sufficiently formal register and try not to write colloquially
-So I think that I have to work on words that are used in formal texts, try to expand my vocabulary to improve my texts.
ELISA B.
ReplyDeleteIn my report, I did well the division of the text into sections because this structure makes my work easier. I found more challenging using a formal language since many common words must be replaced by more appropriate words that sometimes I don’t know. I need to work on vocabulary and how to structure sentences well. I would like that my report to be clear, complete and correct.
Barbara S.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, I've written a well organized report, using an appropriate vocabulary. I've thought about original ideas also because I've found the topic really interesting.
I haven't had any particular difficulties, but I think that I can improve my skills more, especially learning new words that can help me to write better.
Rita B.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion my report was well organized but my ideas about the activities and the gift weren't original but I found challenging thinking about them.
I had some difficulties to use a formal language I need to work on it.
Gabriele d .
ReplyDeleteMy report wasn't really organised as the others but is beacuse i did with inpulse and i didn't tough about organisation for too long.
i found my ideas to be pretty innovative and i really like them .
the toughest part was finding good ideas , i really need to work on organisation
-I think I have divided the text well into paragraphs because in these situations I am ordered
ReplyDelete-For me was very challenging write with formal language, because it’s not easy choose the rights words in these situations
- I have to work to enrich my vocabulary and learn new terms especially regarding formal language
Fabrizio Combina
While I was writing my report I think I have structured it well, because I have divided it into paragraphs and with good ideas.
ReplyDeleteI found more challenging to find original ideas and write in a formal way, because usually we use an informal language.
I need to work on the vocabulary, using more specific and formal words to improve my report.
Genre Elisa
I think that my report was well structured and had good headings. For me it was difficult to find something interesting to write. I should learn new words so that in the next report my vocabulary will be more formal.
ReplyDeleteSusan Re
Guri Alessia
ReplyDeleteI think I wrote my report well, I think I put some good ideas and I explained them quite good.
I found challenging using a formal register because I don't use it as usual, I don't have too many formal words in my vocabulary so I think I have to expand it.
C. Erika
ReplyDeletewhile I was writing my report I think I have divided the text well into paragraphs and I find some good ideas.
I found more challenging to write in a formal way.
I have to work on the vocabulary, for be able to use even of synonyms and learn new terms of formal language.
Nouhaila Z.
ReplyDeleteI think that my report was well structured in paragraphs and in general well organized. I found challenging the formal writing, so I think I have to work on that and I also have to respect the word limit.
Biondo A.
ReplyDeleteI think I did my text well for my different ideas and the structure of the text.
I found challenging what to find as a present to give to Macklemore.
My next report, I wish it was about the LGBT world.